contents page.

if i was to do this again i would have structured it out better, as there are a lot of blank spaces on the page. also i would have made it look more interesting by adding colour and taking my own pictures to have made it look more professional and attractive. it looks untidy and unprofessional, and i wouldn't want this to be what people associate with my magazine. although i think that the title size is a good size and use of space. 

Feedback 28.1.11

Sarah, you need to ensure you also upload the sketch of the contents page for the prelim. Please see Mike for this. You need to work on this in your own time. You should have posted your initial ideas and outlined the conventions of music magazines by now. You need to get working on this asap or you will fall behind. You should be on to planning b this time next week.
Please also book workshop time with Mike for next week.

Mrs A

if i was to do this again i would try to add more colour to it and make it look brighter and stand out more,  i would also make the layout less simplistic and more interesting. i think that there are not enough short captions and it would have been more realistic if i had added a barcode and a price. i like the style of writing i have used for my title as it is bold and stands out but is also modern and would attract students. also i spent a bit of time on my cut out to make sure that i didn't leave any of the background on it and it looked more realistic.